4 Responses to “ Nadiah’s mock presentation feedback ”
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I think it would be nice to have actual artifacts for your brochures. It’s a bit difficult to follow sometimes what is conceptual and what your marketing materials are. It might be easier to understand this if you either printed the brochures out to pass around, or if it were more evident that they were brochures.
Also, it is still a bit difficult to follow not understanding IB, so maybe it would be nice during your presentation to have a very easy to follow explanation of how you plan to integrate EHL and IB.
I would suggest testing out a few ways of presenting this information (diagrams, animation, etc.) because your project is really information dense. With that said, I think your instinct to use diagrams to illustrate your points as you’ve been doing will be very helpful when it comes time to present.
I would definitely print out the presentation / product, even if it isn’t complete it adds a higher sense of completion. I think you need to re-think what your diagrams are saying and make it more concise.
Hit me up for design crits !
I think the idea that combined EHL and IB is valuable.
But it’s hard to understanding for only one slide although I believe that you’re going to make different.
Thanks.
Roxanne:)